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Jasmin I (1) by theperfectmind Jasmin I (1) by theperfectmind
This is my 2nd attempt of doing people photography, so don't be to hard, but I'm looking forward to get some nice cirtique.

I did this shoot with my little cousin, it was her 1st shooting :giggle: So there we are, two total noobs ^^

A few more pics will follow :)

Used the soft red action by :iconlieveheersbeestje:

:iconemilyblox:
Wow, for a beginner in portrait photography this really is wonderful. :clap:
Love the framing, no chopped off legs, arms, etc! Also love how you've included a nice amount of background too, though not too much to distract the viewer from the model. I also love how she has a leaf balancing on the end of her right boot. (Not sure if this was intentional?) but either way it gives you a sense of movement that she's kind of kicking her legs at the leaves! It also provides a "Oh!" moment if you didn't notice it straight away at first :) Love the models styling, great choice of clothes that fit the type of shot perfectly and her expression is good too. Not really a lot I can critique on as I don't see much to improve, however I hope the little pointers I picked out can help you in the future as to what to look for. :)
Keep up the good work! :blowkiss:
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I'm very impressed, as a beginner in portrait and people shots, you're very good. I love the warm colors, and her outfit fits well with her surroundings. The image is sharp, and clear. My suggestion would be to add a bit more contrast, or intensity to the image. (Only slightly.) Her pose is good, but I'd like to her hand a little better. (The one under the leaves) I think it would add more focus to the subject if the photo was taken at a slightly lower angle. Lastly, maybe make the text on the image, smaller. That way it doesn't distract from the girl in the photo. (:

Overall, it's a great image. Very dreamy and sweet, and the model is very doll-like and beautiful. Keep up the great work!
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love the autumnal tones!
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theperfectmind Nov 1, 2012  Hobbyist Photographer
me too :giggle:
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